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~Loki's POV~

Sadly, I had a perfect view of the ceremony from my window.  [Name] looked so beautiful in her silvery dress, holding her flowers, walking gracefully up and down the aisle.  I had meant to tell her how I felt earlier, but that damned woman interrupted me.  I wished I could be with her, out of this cage.  After the ceremony, night took over.  Everyone ate, drank, and was merry.  The dancing was something to behold, indeed.  [Name] was a lovely dancer, as well.  Her lovely smile decorated her face during most of the party.  Sometimes, though, she would look down and away, eyes becoming sad.  But, it would be cured when she would get up to dance again.  The fireplace lit up in my room, washing me with some warmth.  I looked at it for only a second.  When I looked back through my window, [name] was gone.

"Hey," you said happily as you walked into Loki's room.
"Hello, [name]," Loki replied.
You held up the two small plates in your hands.
"I brought cake," you giggled.
"Ah, I've been waiting to try this."
The two of you sat by the window.  Loki took a bite of cake.
"This is, how did you say it?  Awesome," Loki said, smiling.
"Right?  You can't go wrong with cake."
The two of you ate happily together.
"How was the party?" Loki asked.
"It was fun.  The food was great, so was the music.  I even caught the bouquet."
"Good."
"It was lacking in one area, though."
"What's that?"
"I didn't get to dance with you."
Loki's heart skipped a beat, as did yours.  You looked up at him with your big [e/c] eyes.  He looked intently into your eyes.  Then, he smiled a warm, inviting smile.
"Well, it seems the musicians are still playing," he said, standing up.
Loki offered you his hand.  You took it eagerly.  You stood and Loki spun you around, catching you and pulling you close.  One hand held yours, the other rested on the small of your back.  You swayed back and forth for a while.  You both laughed.  You rested your head on Loki's chest, feeling right at home.  At that moment, everything was perfect.  You could feel Loki grin against the top of your head.  Then, the music ended.
"[Name]…" Loki said, voice trembling.
"Yeah, Loki?"
You looked up at him again.  His verdant eyes hypnotized you.  You waited nervously for whatever he had to say.
"Something has happened to me.  Something that I never thought could happen," he said quietly.
"What is it?" your tone held worry.
"You see, you've been so kind to me.  I love it when I see you and I hate it when you leave.  You intrigue me and frighten me all at once."
It was as if Loki took the thoughts right out of your head and recited them to you.
"[Name], I think…I may be falling for you."
You looked up at Loki, astonished.
"I do not understand these feelings.  I've never experienced them before.  Before I met you, I lived in shame.  But now that I've met you…  You make me feel alive again, [name].  I must know your feelings for me."
You felt tears of joy welling up in your eyes.
"Loki, I…I might be falling in love with you, too," you replied.
Tears welled up in Loki's eyes as well.  A single tear escaped his eye as he let out a relieved laugh.  He picked you up by the waist and locked his lips to yours.  It was unexpected, but you loved it.  His lips were gentle but firm against yours.  You wrapped your fingers in his raven hair.  Your heart fluttered in your chest.  Loki couldn't possibly know how happy he'd made you feel.  You continued to kiss as Loki set you down.  He wrapped his arms around you.  His lips parted ever so slightly.  You took it as an invitation directed to your tongue.  Loki's hold on you tightened as you slipped your tongue into his mouth.  You grinned into the kiss.  After a little while, you and Loki reluctantly stopped kissing.
"Let's not go too crazy just yet," you whispered.
"Agreed," Loki laughed.
You yawned unwittingly.  Loki smiled down at you.
"You should get to bed, dear [name].  As should I."
"Mmm, I guess so."
Loki walked you to the door, giving you another passionate kiss before you left.
"Goodnight, love," you whispered.
"Goodnight, my princess."
FINALLY!!!! :iconfuckyeahplz:
My little present for everyone ^^
Enjoy~!
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:iconmortem221:
Mortem221 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OH MY NORSE GOD!! I luv this story!!
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SMfanatic815 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Student Writer
:iconfuckyeahplz: FINALLY!
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Atlanta929 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Student General Artist
OMGKJF0dosaj fesiJFKDSJFKSLADJFOEWI DA FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLSSSSSSSSSSS
YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER YOU MADE ME CRY  AND BE SOOOOO HAPPY AT THE SAME TIME AND I AM NORMALLY A VERY EMOTIONALLY DEAD PERSON AHHHHHHHHH
(sorry for spamming)
AH MAH LOKI *squeals in amazedness* *shuts down fangirl side* sorry bout that anyway AMAZING I wish I could write like that anyway amazing amazing amazing now I must CONTINUE IN THE READING OF AWSOMNESS AHHH!
<3 Reader
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StarfallVulpixGirl Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
How romantic! :la:
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FateZerofangirl Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Student Artist
I was expecting he'd surprise me by attending the wedding but this is actually better.I like being alone and I love it more when I'm alone with somebody I love,especially Loki :D Love this story!
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KrazzyKitten Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
Awwwwwww :squee: --proceeds to flail around in happiness--
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NikiMaweird Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP! ASc nljeefmk9pldxöq"D"§$= *melts down to puddy*
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Sayoki666 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013
*faints dramatically*
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Ai-1037 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*loki'd*
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tinyfashioncat Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!
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Lady-Loki2 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WOOOOOOO! I'm gonna be needing another box of tissues, please.... And possibly a hospital room. -heart attack-
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jackalripper Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
"princess"?
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:iconblacktudorrose:
BlackTudorRose Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*Squeak's and dies*
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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Charleywren Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i've been saying "aw! owo" every time i read one of these
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, thank you!
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RussiaObssessive Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconteheplz:
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:iconreaperrose:
ReaperRose Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Muahahaha, another set of ovaries destroyed :icondignitylaughplz:
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WhiskStar Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
EHIDKSGDUDHD. :iconexplosionplz:
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:iconreaperrose:
ReaperRose Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!!! :D
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firepuddles Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
My ovaries! they just exploded!
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:iconreaperrose:
ReaperRose Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I gave up trying to keep mine XD everytime I grow a new pair of them, they end up exploding somehow XD
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firepuddles Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
i'm starting to think that you're probably right.
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:iconreaperrose:
ReaperRose Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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SpiralWillow Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Be still my fan-girl heart
(and waving hands) :D
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Rosa-rossa Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*________________________* Okay, now I can die.
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:iconreaperrose:
ReaperRose Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha XD
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chibipandas Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh god my fan girl heart.....its like freakin squealing so hard man XD


i've never felt this girly before in my life o-o



...pstt....you rock LOL XD
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! ^^
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102AnimeLover102 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:iconcraiplz: So cute
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:iconreaperrose:
ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, thank you! :D
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Umimori Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ffff! I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER! :iconcraiplz: -shot- :'D
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I will work on it after the next chapters of my Bruce and Jareth fics. I. HAVE. NO. LIIIIIIFE. XDD
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Umimori Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok!~ xD

You must have a life if you're writing such wonderful stories! ; v ;
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
What I meant was, it's literally all I do. I rarely go out and socialize, I just stay in and write. it's nice, though XD
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Umimori Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
xD It's alright, I'd rather be drawing instead of socializing. xDD It's a strange habit of mine.. LOL.
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:iconreaperrose:
ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol yeah XD
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Retroactive-Mayhem Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ermahgerd.
I Fangirled
So hardcore
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ermahgerd thenk yer! XD
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IRideAMagicalLadle Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconwoohooplz:
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:icondummywooplz:
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mewRachel1 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
took long enough. You know how to drag things out and drive the readers crazy. (You and Hussy I swear:])
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:iconreaperrose:
ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I just got compared to Hussie?! :iconiloveyouplz:
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Animay813 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Student General Artist
AWWWWW THAT MADE ME MELT IN SIDE. IT WAS BEAUTIFUL.
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, thank you! <3
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Animay813 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Student General Artist
no problem
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Del-the-Mel Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
mission accomplished! now then about continuing your other stories: :iconmoarplz: (please)
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:iconreaperrose:
ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, since you said please XDD I'll be working on those today
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Del-the-Mel Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
victory for zim! :iconzimplz:
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