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"So, tell me about your…" you knew you needed to phrase this carefully, "former family."
Loki's face froze into a stony, cold mask of pain.  You were a little on edge when his eyes got dark.
"Odin," Loki began.  "Is old and weak.  He lacks proper judgment.  My mother is too dedicated to Odin to realize my agony.  And Thor…"
Loki's hands clenched into fists.
"He's a foolish, reckless, stupid, arrogant, selfish, egotistical pig."
You looked at Loki's face, which was still transformed into its dark expression.  You reached over to touch his hand, but he harshly took it away.  Your eyes dropped.
"I'm sorry," you said, "I didn't mean to upset you."
Loki said nothing.  He simply stared ahead, lost in a mental maze of hate.  It jarred you to see him like that.  You were afraid; one sudden move, one word, could send him off the handle.  You had never seen it, but looking into his eyes, you knew it was possible.  Night had fallen during your conversations with Loki, but you weren't tired.
You finally stood up and went into the kitchen to prepare dinner.  Hamburgers sounded good, since you just bought ground beef at the store.  You washed your hands and began to prepare them.  Loki's cold, hateful gaze remained in your mind.  It terrified you.  Soon, the burger patties were cooking in the skillet and you were washing your hands again.  You turned around from the sink to see Loki standing in the doorway.  His facial expression had changed.  He looked incredibly forlorn.  You let out a sigh and walked over to him.  You wrapped your arms around his neck.  He flinched at first, but then he put his hands on your back.
"I'm sorry, Loki," you whispered.  "If you need to talk more, I'm here okay?"
"It's hard to be the god of mischief when my heart is so heavy, weighed down by both our tales," Loki whispered back.
At this point, no matter how much he infuriated you before, or would in the future, you needed him now.
You squeezed him closer to you.  You stroked his smooth, ebony hair.
"Try to put it out of your mind, Loki.  It's how I cope, it might work for you," you said.
"I only wish it were that simple, [name]."
You held each other for a moment, his head buried in the crook of your neck.  The timer for the burgers went off, and you reluctantly broke away to flip them.  You got two plates and opened up a bag of hamburger buns and tortilla chips.  You could feel Loki hovering behind you.  Occasionally, he would run his hand along your shoulder.  You felt that same bittersweet feeling from before.  You still couldn't quite put your finger on what it was.
Soon, dinner was ready.  You prepared Loki's plate as well as your own.  Loki sat down at the table and you handed him his plate.
"Eat," you said quietly.  "You'll feel better."
The two of you ate quietly.  The food was good, but the mood was still a little down.
"A very good meal," Loki said when he finished.
"Thank you," you replied.
The two of you smiled at each other.  Then, you elected to go and change into some pajamas.  You wore a camisole and shorts, but left your bra on.  When you went into the living room, Loki sat silently on the couch.  A new look entered his eye.  It was something slightly dark, but it enticed you, dared you to come closer.  You suddenly felt exposed somehow.  You took half a step closer when Loki stood up.  He bounded over to you and pinned you against the wall.
"Lo--!"
You were about to shout at him when his lips collided with yours.  You stood frozen for a moment, then seemed to melt into him.  Loki pressed against you with his entire body.  His lips were soft, but kissed you ravenously.  He grabbed a handful of your hair and pulled your head back.  You gasped for air as he began to assail your neck.  The bittersweet feeling was even stronger now.
"Say my name," Loki growled, his lips vibrating against your neck.
"Loki…" you panted.
"Louder!"
He bit down hard on your neck.
"Loki!" you screamed.
You laced your fingers into his hair as he came up to look you in the eye.  He looked more mischievous than ever, but his eyes were also tinged with longing.  Longing for you.
Yaaaay! Finally!
Big, tremendous thanks to my friends and watchers for the support on this story. I had no idea it would be such a hit with you guys, so thanks a million! :love:

Next chapter...there WILL be lemon >:3
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bandbabe2009 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Student Photographer
HUZZZAH, I knew it would happen. I KNEW IT! SO LOVING THIS STORY!
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Lazuli23 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
my heart did explode...lol
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NikiMaweird Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:faint:
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chizu-kan Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Such a good read =v= 
hahaha~ I couldn't help but hear loki from comic-con (if you guys know what i mean) saying "say my name" while reading that part xD too sexyyyyy
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CydoniaKnights0317 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Ahh. I feel nauseous reading this lemony excerpt...But it's a good feeling. I'm probably just dazed at this. ;D I NEED MOAR AND I SHALL CONTINUE!!
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ElvishLoki Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Professional General Artist
I like.....it's so good.:)
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tinyfashioncat Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well...that escalated quickly.
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vampire1700 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
If only xD if were real.
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Lady-Loki2 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ending.....
-dies- .... -is dead... Again-
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BOBCOMICS Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
can u send me the link (:iconlinkzeldaplz: LOL) to the next few chapters?
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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Charleywren Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OOH GURL
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm-hm XD
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GenevieveAmore Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
Harry Potter reference!! However unintentional, I just fucking quoted Remus Lupin. :squee:
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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GenevieveAmore Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
Yeah, the whole "Eat, you'll feel better," thing. Dementors. Chocolate. That is where my mind went. Not kidding.
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love it~ :D
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GenevieveAmore Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
May I just say...LOKI! :lokiapprovesplz:
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Whoop whoop! :icontomhiddlestonplz:
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GenevieveAmore Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
Teehee. Would you be so kind as to read the fanfiction I'm writing? I would love your opinion!!!
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What are you writing about? :D
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GenevieveAmore Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013
GOD why don't those WORK!?!?!?! :|
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RussiaObssessive Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lemons! :D
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yus! :D
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RussiaObssessive Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconlemonsplz:
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hanah-likes-loki Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
Yaaaay. Loki lemoness~
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^w^
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RoseOfTheRune Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOKI!!
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know! XD
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WhiskStar Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Holy shit. I don't think I'm ready for a Loki lemon.

Fuck it, I'll read it anyway.
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ehehehehehe...
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Rosa-rossa Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
D: Yeah, and now explain to me: how Can I do my homework with this in my mind?
LOL coooooooool!
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, I know the feels XD
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CarboMcoco Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student General Artist
When I fail my exam, I'm gonna blame you.
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry D': cookie? :cookie:
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heehee thanks! ^^
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MightyBooshLover15 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
ASDFGHJKL.
Ok. So I was creeping through comments on one of the other chapters.
And I found that thing about the Red Necklace.
And Hiddles' voice.
And.
Just.
My.
Lady.
Bits.
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ReaperRose Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh God, I watch that video SOOOO much...His voice is like...golen liquid sex.
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MightyBooshLover15 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
I sent it to my Pavi. xD
I heard so much screaming and fangirling.
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